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Tuesday, 3 July 2012

The End of Road









The train had slowly stopped at the last station. It was evening, dusk to be precise; when the tired rays of sun turned orange, the blushing sky turned deep pink and lazy the September clouds turned red. This place was serene, near the mountains and had a laidback air to it. The backdrop of the hills made it picture-perfect. It induced the feeling of doing nothing and watching as time passed by. The kind of place everyone dreams of, but never gets to live at.

He got down from the train and looked around for his host. He looked tired but his eyes twinkled. His appearance could have been confusing to some, but the locals were familiar with foreigners coming to their town in search of something. His stubble and spectacles gave away the fact that he was an unkempt geek. He wore the Rudraaksh bracelet around his right wrist. A simple orange kurta and old denims made him look like those fabled travelers who left home to search for the truth. He had travelled thousands of miles through air and then hundreds of miles through land to reach where he was. This was the Abode of Gods, and he was searching for Them.

He checked his cellphone. There was a text message; it said “I’ll be late. Got flat tires. Be there ASAP”. He sighed. He had nothing to do but wait in this unfamiliar land. He felt strangely peaceful as he saw the huge Himalayan range guarding over him. Maybe, They are the Gods. He smiled inwardly as he thought of his peers back home, who had tried everything from vodka to weed, from cocaine to meth to find their centre of peace. How daft they were! They had been looking in the wrong spot all the time.

He traveled light, but carried books all the time. He checked his inexpensive watch, and sat down at the rusty bench to read his copy of The Alchemist. This was the sole reason that had led him to initiate this journey. He felt inspired every time he touched the cover of the book or read Coelho’s life story. When he had first read the book, he couldn’t sleep for many nights. His soul had been literally shaken from ambitious slumbers. He wrapped up his career as junior research associate at 28, gathered what he needed and embarked on a journey to he knew not where.

As he read the text slowly, letting each word absorb, as did rainwater to dry Earth, he felt his attention diverting. He focused on each syllable more, looking at the shape of each single letter. But he felt as if some unseen force was trying to pull his face up. He gave in and looked up and around. The sky had grown darker and clusters of stars were beginning to shine, but that wasn’t the thing that distracted him. The station seemed deserted except a few tea shops and their distant noise. But that didn't distract him either. Then, he saw a woman sitting on the bench on the platform across the tracks. An Indian Bride.

He adjusted his spectacles to see more clearly. He could see the traditional attire of the Hindu bride. He was spellbound at its utter beauty. He couldn’t recall the name of that dress. He had seen something similar back home at the marriage of an Indian colleague. This was way more real. He then noticed her face, and gasped for breath. In his entire existence, he had seen innumerable women, talked to many and slept with some, but none so divinely gorgeous. He could have sworn he saw a glow from her face. Her brows and her eyes seemed to be sculpted with perfection. She was wearing a heavy necklace with intricate design of jewels. Her attire, he thought, was quite extravagant. Her arms had a huge number of bangles, which seemed like gold. He could even see the striking brown colored designs on her hands and upper arms that looked similar to a tattoo, but exuded tradition and not rebellion.

He could not take his eyes off her now. Her skin was too smooth to be real, and as white as clouds in Spring. She wore a nose ring, giving her a rustic appearance. Her chin had a dimple in the middle, and her lips seemed naturally red. She even had a few strands of hair falling over the left side of her face. Her visage did have an expression of melancholy, but that somehow made her even more beautiful. Her hands rested lightly on her knees, and her long fingers were still. The elegant attire she wore accentuated her ample bosom vividly. Her waist was slightly visible, and he could feel the hair on the back of his neck stand up. Her feet, strangely, were bare.

He was fixated. The mountain air began to grow sweetly cold, but he felt warm and comforted. He held the book, but couldn’t feel it. He was aware of the time, but couldn’t register it. He was breathing, but somehow his existence seemed to be unsure. He stared as if someone held his eyeballs to the scene. She was a hypnotic sight. He felt a huge amount of varied emotions wash over him.

He felt joyous to have found her; joyous beyond any mortal could have ever been.
He was filled with curiosity of a different kind. He could not make out the reason for both of them being there at exactly the same time. But he was sure it happened for a reason.

He felt deep respect. It looked as if she was a Goddess. She was too perfectly chiseled to be real. He wanted to lie down in reverence at her bare feet.

He felt immeasurable attraction. It seemed as if she was the sole reason for his existence; as if the breath he drew came from her.

He felt immense love. It appeared as if he had been searching for this one woman all his life; as if he was born for her.

He felt intense lust. Her appearance had the sensuality of Venus. Her skin made him crave for the carnal pleasure that could only be satiated by her.

He felt insurmountable anger. She was someone’s bride, that someone’s existence enraged him. If someone had her, he could not.

He felt gnawing fear. She seemed as near as his breath, but was as far as a different universe.
He was afraid he might lose her, without realizing he never had her.

And he felt a strange amount of peace. He was beginning to feel his journey had already ended. His pursuit of truth seemed entirely futile now. The truth he sought, sat before him, the most gorgeous and terrifying fusion of emotions.

As he stared at her, without blinking even once, he felt that she knew he was watching. At that very instant, she slowly turned her gaze towards him, as if she read his mind. Their eyes finally met. What he felt was far beyond any expression. His throat went dry, and gasped for breath. He struggled to keep himself from falling over. The entire universe ceased to exist. The mountains and the breeze, the stars and the moon, the station and the bench, the book and the bag, her body and his body… they went into darkness. And all he could see were those dark enchanting eyes that smiled and twinkled.

He woke up with a start. His host had woke him up from his sleep.
“You must have been very tired. You were sleeping with your book and your mouth, open” he chuckled and held out a hand to shake.

He shook hands and tried to make sense out of what had happened just few minutes ago. His mind said it was real and helplessly resisted the thought of it being a dream. His brain suggested calmly that he had fallen asleep and just had a weird dream. He stood up now and took a deep breath. His host had a knowing smile.

“Did you dream of something? Or more precisely, someone?”
He was startled. “Well I’m not sure if it was a dream! It was too real to have been a dream. But how could you know about it?”
“I’m making just guesses here. Do not forget what land you are in, brother. Here we know things before they occur.”

His host smiled again as they walked out of the station towards his Jeep. He stood puzzled at how things were turning out. They both sat in the Jeep. There was a newspaper lying on the dashboard.
“Perhaps you should read it. It might bring you back to reality.”
He opened a random page, not too interested in the news but to get back to his senses. His eye was caught by something familiar. He looked at the image for a long time as his host drove slowly. Every single feature on her face was exactly like the bride he had seen moments ago. It seemed that she was looking right back him through that photo and smiling again, seductively. The date on the newspaper was nearly a week old. He then noticed the page title. Obituaries.

27 comments:

  1. OMG...this was sooo beautiful. The subtleness in the character of that woman and her description is simply magical. And excellent twist in the end makes it more intriguing a read.

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    1. Thanks so much dear lady :) I'm glad you liked it so much

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  2. Remarkably interesting storyline...the way you described the beautiful bride made her look even more beautiful...though I wish I can know "( )'s life story" it was...?
    The closure is one of the bestest I must say...:)

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    1. Thanks for reading & commenting Deepika :) some stories are best left unfinished... I'm grateful you liked it :)

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  3. Interesting read! Very intricately written and nicely ended. Keep writing Shivang! :)

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  4. asumm.... recovrd al dat was cravd bt did nt existd in ur lst story... just fell in luv with ur bride n da little Fortunate accidentl tryst...Bravo \m/

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    1. Thank you Mercy. I'm happy you could read & like it :)

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  5. WOW!spellbound!One of my favourite :)A very different storyline and interesting too!What a fine description of each and eveything!I believe that after reading this story now i'm going to enjoy reading the next book in my reading list,'The Interpretation of Dreams'...

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    1. Thanks so much for being so kind with your words Shalini :) Let me know more about the book :)

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    2. again another masterpiece by u...

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  6. interesting...........very well written......really liked.....

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  7. Oh wow. This is your best so far. Gripping story and the way it's written, I couldn't stop reading! Quite some shock towards the end :P Though I loved the way you described how he felt when he saw her. Awesome! :)

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    1. Thanks for finding the time Ashna... glad to read your comment :) I should stop shocking people now with my stories ;)

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  8. Omg.. amazing story!
    So gripping, and such careful description, especially when you are talking about the bride in the story.
    Just loved it..

    I will have to take some tips on story writing from you now! ;)

    Saloni! :)

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    1. haha so you could finally comment ;)... thank you Saloni for your kind words :) I don't know about tips, for you are amazingly talented yourself, but we can definitely share thoughts about it :)

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  9. mesmerizing. riveting. fascinating the way you described henna as tattoo that exuded tradition and not rebellion! brilliant idea, very well presented :) I always look forward to your stories, Shivang! you are a brilliant story-teller :)

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    1. Thanks so much Nivedita :) really appreciate your kindness. I'm glad you liked my story :)

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  10. wow ! what can I say? all has been said by rest of your friends...a very captivating story...very well recited...held my interest till the last word... the ending was a surprise...gave me goosebumps....the description is vivid and beautiful...I don't think even a single line needs editing...great !

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    1. Thanks a million Payal... i really feel humbled by your kind words. I am glad you liked my story so much :)

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  11. The first thing I notice every time I read a story of yours is how professionally it is written. Really. And that description you gave of the bride was just mesmerising. :)

    I must say you are the master of descriptions and detail. Great story. :D

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    1. Thanks for reading Usama... feel really encouraged by your comment :)

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  12. Really liked it. The ending was great. Loved reading it. :)Well done shivang.

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